Monday 1 February 2016

Star Writers:

Bayleigh Parsons, Leo Mbata, Isabelle Reynolds, Jaseem Miah, George White, Coral Wilkinson, Leah Joyce, Levan Towe-Enu, Ethan Gibb, Olivia Crane & Finley Short: these children have all produced pieces of outstanding writing this week. Look out for examples of their work on the blog!


Great job for improving your Big Write! You used captivating sentence openers and some WOW vocabulary in your non-chronological report.
Leo Mbata

For your persuasive letter to sea parks appealing for them to end the plight of the captive killer whales!
Isabelle Reynolds

A great story Jaseem - you ensured that you completed as many goals as possible

Well done George for your well written historical genre text. You used some great descriptive techniques.

For your fantastic use of adjectives in your Big Write Plan.
Leah Joyce



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